I know most people don't read, but if you don't mind it and you have some spare time, would you please help me out? I have never had a book published before (well, not on purpose, but that's a long story) and I want it to be great.
This story, "The Night Prince" is partially a love story and partially a mystery. I am fairly new to both genres. In addition to which, this story is set in a historical time period (nothing specific, just old) so the text and especially the dialogue will be antiquated.
Rather than me telling you what I was going for (because, for the most part, I don't even know), can you please just read it, or read a chapter here and there, and tell me what it does for you? Thank you very much.









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100% of deviants are fools. Do not copy or paste this unless you are one of the 0% who happens to be omniscient.
I'm a stream of puzzle pieces, falling. Catch me, catch me, if you can. [link]
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My novel!
Plus we can hang out, just us, if you want.
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My novel!
Have a safe and Happy Halloween!
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If equal affection cannot be, let the more loving one be me. --W.H. Auden
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