This is the main character for a novel I'm writing this summer. I won't be posting it here (well, maybe a chapter or two) because I want to actually publish this one. Still, any feedback on the characters is appreciated.
(The back view should include the cape, but I left it off so all the other details would show).
Name: Doug Doomson
Alias: The Golden Guardian
Weapon of Choice: Sword
Story: Doug comes from a long line of super villains, but he doesn't think the villain life is for him. However, this is a world in which everyone develops some kind of super persona, and if you're not a villain, you've got to be a hero. The problem is, Doug doesn't identify with the heroes around him either. Then one day, Doug meets a friend who introduces him to a new type of heroics - and just in time, because a new enemy is lurking in the shadows.