Edit: Colour change to the fluffy thing seems to help. I'm thinking maybe the wings should be black and grey, but I feel rather strongly about the red and purple for now.
I'm still not sure I like how I've drawn her, and even less sure about the colour scheme. It feels right in my mind but looks wrong on the screen.
This is my OC who began in a gaming fanfic. I've been working on a story about her just for fun, but it's very backburner for now. Next think I'm going to do is try drawing her in a different pose (flying!) and then maybe try an animation loop.