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Changed the theremin part in the middle. 
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Scattle Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
The concept is really good! The choices for instrumentation are very clever.

My only issue is that sometimes the percussion/rhythm section seems inconsistent, like switching from a steady meter to a syncopated one at random intervals. I think it might be a result of looping the guitar/percussion just a tad off the beat, which creates a sort of 'skip'.
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CaptainQuirk Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
I noticed that too.  I was playing around with the timing and I think I got it right on a newer version (not uploaded yet).  Actually, would you mind if I sent the new version to you so I can borrow your ears to see if I fixed it? 
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Scattle Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
Absolutely!
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CaptainQuirk Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2014
Thanks!  I sent it to your hotmail acct.
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Rainbow-Acey Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hm
the whistling after the guitar still seems a little... more like it could be changed, I'd say the very last whistle-note of the whole song should be dropped maybe a half or whole step.
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CaptainQuirk Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
I tried it a little lower.  It either sounds non-harmonious or, if I make it really low, it doesn't seem to have that different an effect. 
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Rainbow-Acey Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it sounds fine, it's just not quite catchy. I figured you'd want something that a lot of people would be humming all the time after just a few listens.
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CaptainQuirk Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
I DO want that. :omg:  I THINK I've settled on a final version.  I'm going to make some accompanying images to see if that helps.
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CaptainQuirk Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2014
I think I know what you mean.
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